For writing, I had to make a DLO about what u need ed to include when u where revise editing
here is my d.l.o https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1MWaA4oFeGl46ZzjMIzWc-_IUw2fxo8GRgzuECVLmKbM/edit
Have u ever used anything in my d.l.o in a writing text u wrote.
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Hi Pacis.
ReplyDeleteI was unable to see your work. There are permission problems and it wont let me in. If you can fix this let me know I would love to see your work.
Steve